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Tuesday, September 25, 2012

Hmmm,, Story?

So I'm thinking of writing a story. Never really written a whole story so we will see how this goes! here is what I have so far tell me what you think!

'Deja Vu' thought Sophia. Days earlier she had a dream of a storm like the one happening tonight, and of her mom working a double shift. she just hoped the the part of her dream, depicting her mother not coming home, didnt come true. Wait, speaking of her mother, it was already 11:15 pm and her mother was not home. Just then  her brother, Jason camden, coming down the stairs said " Mom worked a double shift, and should be home any minute now." Sophia now looked worried because it was a dangerous stom, and she was terrified for he mother's life. Not only because of the nature of the storm but also because of the dream she had previously had. 

Ever since Sophia was a little girl she had had these kinds of dreams, and usually they came true. That's why this dream scared her so. The only problem was every time she told someone of her dreams, they said she was crazy, except her brother Jason. However, Jason never agreed with her in public for fear of his mother, Scarlet. Scarlet had once told Sophia that she was embarrassing her with her little stories, and if she did not stop them she would admit her to a hospital. That was when she was 10 years old, Sophia now was 21 years old. She was going to school for a degree in Criminal Psychology. Sophia was also a master of taking care of her brother who was now 11 years old, while her mom worked. Jason knew that Sophia wasn't crazy, because he saw how much her dreams scared her. He also saw how much disbelief the grown-ups showed in her stories, so someone had to believe in his sister! 




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